This is AWESOME. I don't even like Buffy, or Spike, or Spuffy, or even BtVS--I can't offer any critique on the fic end--yet this is still awesome. Epic poetry! Epic length! This is so amazing.
I'm stumbling with some of your scansion, to be honest, but on re-reading have realised that half of those instances are because of stressed syllable differences between US/UK preferred pronunciations. I'm surprised by how much of a difference that makes.
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Date: 16/09/2011 10:16 (UTC)I'm stumbling with some of your scansion, to be honest, but on re-reading have realised that half of those instances are because of stressed syllable differences between US/UK preferred pronunciations. I'm surprised by how much of a difference that makes.
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