Yay, I love your poetry. I like the repetitions in this. It's got its own little precipitation cycle. And if she starts by looking into the water for her destiny, and then, falling, becomes the water, and then goes back to looking, the implication is that she's looking into herself to find her destiny (with Spike's eyes for mirrors, a bit), which is a thought I like.
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Date: 05/05/2012 00:51 (UTC)