quinara: Tara walking in the Slayer's desert. (Restless desert)
And so we continue! Book IX will be coming very soon, which is possibly the only excuse I have for the ever-so-slight cliffhanger ending of this one... Hope you enjoy!! Massive thanks to [livejournal.com profile] brutti_ma_buoni and [personal profile] verity for their super-betaing. :D

As usual: Spuffy (as I always forget to say, not that it makes much impression here); PG-13; ~4000 words (~530 lines); warnings for the series of death and denied agency, with only brief mentions in this book. Extra note, though! The origin myth of the Watchers' Council sketched out in this book is very much dependent on a conversation [livejournal.com profile] brutti_ma_buoni and I had a while ago, so credit needs to go at least half her way. (Said conversation may well make it to your screens in a less scattershot form at some point, by the way, so watch out!)

Willow tells her tale; Illyria is challenged.

[VII]

VIII

      Although she always knew she’d have to tell
Her story, Willow wishes she could wait,
That she could bail and put it off until
Tomorrow, maybe, when she’s had some sleep.
But Buffy’s looking angry, disbelief
A threat and challenge in dry, hazel eyes.
... )
quinara: Wishverse Buffy in a white frame. (Buffy Wish white box)
Yep, we're back on the road with the next three books! The other two for this section are in beta, so I think it's time we pootled on. :) (Even if it is Saturday night; I'm in the mood for achieving something, so humour me here...) Big thanks to [livejournal.com profile] brutti_ma_buoni and [personal profile] verity for beta-ing this!!

As always - Spuffy-gen; PG-13; ~4000 words (~520 lines); warnings for the series of death and denied agency, with only brief mentions in this book. (There is also, dare I say it, a dragon...)

The group return to the shelter, where someone unexpected is waiting.

[VI]

VII

      Hey, Calliope, it’s Quinara here;
Just thought I’d try to get in touch again,
Because you never answered when I called
Before? At least, I never felt it when
The ‘spiring came in… ... )
quinara: Spike's car driving down the road. (Spike car)
Sorry this took a little longer than anticipated! But now it's here - and is possibly my favourite book so far. There's Spuffy! Meta-chat with Virgil! A cameo by a character I love! Not to mention that this book means we are HALFWAY THROUGH!! (Hooray for visible milestones!!)

Many many thanks to my betas for this book, [livejournal.com profile] brutti_ma_buoni, [personal profile] fulselden and [livejournal.com profile] ladyofthelog, who were excellent in their comments. I hope people enjoy. :)

PG-13; ~4000 words (~530 lines); warnings for the series of death and denied agency, with lots of issues around death this book.

Spike and Buffy deal with where they've landed; Illyria is tempted.

[V]

VI

      The vastness of the darkness all around,
The plangent loneliness which fills the black
And, biting at his tongue, the bitterness
Of acrid air: it feels like it should be
Too much for Spike. ... )
quinara: Wishverse Buffy in a white frame. (Buffy Wish white box)
If you're just scrolling in, I posted book IV about an hour ago and am now putting up V to create a super-extra-double whammy. VI should be along at some point in the next week (maybe this weekend). Many many thanks to my betas for these books, [livejournal.com profile] brutti_ma_buoni, [livejournal.com profile] ladyofthelog and [personal profile] fulselden!!!! Extra thanks to [livejournal.com profile] mercuriewords for helping me out with a certain brief flash of German.

Warnings: no new ones, but again we are still operating in the light of death and denial of bodily agency. ~4000 words (~500 lines); PG-13.

The three groups unite and a scouting party is formed.

[IV]

V

      The morning comes with Buffy sitting up,
The change from warmth to chill against Spike’s arms.
With eyes still shut his thoughts are fogged as he
Attempts to understand ... )
quinara: Spike smoking on a crate. (Spike crate)
!!! I know, I know, it took long enough, didn't it? Still, I have a new plan of attack called doing chapters in groups, to make the reading experience a little more pleasant. V will be posted this evening as well and VI is COMING SOON in actual real terms (like maybe the weekend?), rather than Spikeid terms of soon meaning maybe a year...

THANK YOU a thousand times to my awesometown betas of these books, [livejournal.com profile] brutti_ma_buoni, [livejournal.com profile] ladyofthelog and [personal profile] fulselden. Your critiques were awesome! Thanks also to [livejournal.com profile] ariss_tenoh for discussing with me the scansion of some words in this book I don't often hear.

Warnings: we are still very much dealing with the fallout from death and denial of bodily agency. A less important pseudo-warning is for the prevalence of OCs and minor characters in this book - we return to our favourites in Book V, so this evening, but I think this is an important book nonetheless and they haven't been completely forgotten, so I hope you still enjoy it!

As usual, it's around ~4000 words (~550 lines) and rated PG-13, with a touch of the swearing.

The Slayers meet another group of people who are fighting in LA.

[III]

IV

      The Slayers run on hearing Buffy's cry,
Retreat without co-ordination, turn
About and almost trip on all the feet
Around them. ... )
quinara: Rinoa from FFVIII watching petals fly. (Rinoa petals)
FICATHON!!

This was in response to another prompt from [livejournal.com profile] eleusis_walks, who was apparently prompting some fun things: Hamlet - Ophelia, Gertrude - down by the water.

I think the only warning here needs to be, well, suicide. Also some horrendous aping of pentameter and Shakespearean dialogue. I don't know who thought that was a good idea...

Hoar Leaves in the Glassy Stream.

A girl played by the water - years ago )
quinara: Spike smoking on a crate. (Spike crate)
I did another [livejournal.com profile] sb_fag_ends ficlet - Half-Loop Topstitch, set almost immediately post Sleeper. It's a little bit sad. :(

But, in news of more serious fic, I'm hoping to find some lovely people who could help me get the next three books of my Spikeid (IV-VI) ready for public consumption. Anyone who likes/understands poetry/scansion, I would really like to ask you for help, especially if you've read the Aeneid as well (or any epic really). It's a bit of a tall order: each book is around 4000 words and they're all in iambic pentameter, but I'm really hoping to get opinions on the three as a sequence and then post them quite soon after one another (not least because IV is heavily OC-focussed). So anyone who has a reasonable amount of time on their hands and would like to fill it with slightly awkward pentameter, um, hi! Do you fancy critting something?

(And if you have no idea what I'm talking about, because it's been a long time since I posted about this, I've got the first three books up, starting from here. ;) )
quinara: Approaching Black Mage from FFIX. (FFIX black mage)
I feel like a blogger trying to make a name for myself, but never mind: I am currently, believe it or not, stealthily residing in [livejournal.com profile] brutti_ma_buoni's schooper schmoopy fic Love is.... I am in the shape of Rulesverse!Spike's sonnet to Buffy (behold, conceits and Pink Floyd references) - but there's much more to see there too, including cardboard love and nose-coordinating roses (aww), so do check it out!

Also, since I'm here reccing, I cannot but echo [livejournal.com profile] ladyofthelog in shoving you all towards The Death of Narcissa Black by [livejournal.com profile] massicot, which is one of the most magnificent things I've seen in a long time - a whole (quite lengthy) fic told in watercolours. Be sure to read the warnings, however.
quinara: Buffy's sad-looking profile from Villains. (Buffy profile)
I had something much different planned for the Who Are You ficathon, but it wouldn't happen - so I wrote a Buffy-Illyria swap instead!

PG (if that); about 1000 words; partially inspired by The Owl and the Nightingale; set post-NFA in one of my futureverses where Buffy and Illyria are friends; slightly strange; no material for 'standard' warnings beyond what happened to Fred.

What can you trust when your instincts are gone?

The Beauty of the Stars. )
quinara: Wishverse Buffy in a white frame. (Buffy Wish white box)
Attempting to distract myself, moi? No, no, I just thought I'd post something for the sheer hell of it...

One of my aborted projects for [livejournal.com profile] seasonal_spuffy this year was a series of poems by Buffy to match those I wrote by Spike last time(? - or whenever). I thought it was unfair that Buffy didn't get to have as much poetry in her voice... But I also realised that writing poetry as Buffy is hard (*whinge*), so I didn't like most of what I wrote. (One day they might come out. Maybe.)

However, I've salvaged from the project the following - Buffy's diary entries, the night before the big battle (ie. in the basement) - something serious and something not quite so. Definitely Spuffy. Apparently about 900 words in total. No particular warnings.

Verse is a bad habit. She picked it up from him.

Tuesday May 20, 2003 )
quinara: Spike smoking on a crate. (Spike crate)
Oh, the Romans... Sometimes Always they amuse me so. As part of trying to work out whether or not we can say whether there was any sort of moral/sexual geographical zoning in Pompeii (say whether there was a 'red light district', to quote an exam paper - I say not in literal terms, but in ideology/perception/phenomenology yes, definitely) I've been reading the records of inscriptions around the town - ie. the dirty graffiti, basically.

Cut for NSFW Romans! (And more! Incl. street poetry!) )
quinara: Sheep on a hillside with a smiley face. (Rinoa Petals)
So, apparently I think Wesley wrote a sestina about Lilah, at some point between A3 and A4. [Gang, I managed to write a sestina!! It's never worked before!]

PG for some slightly gory imagery, no particular warnings, though there is some pretty hefty appropriation of Christian ideas, mainly in the title and first verse. And, also, I should say that I've let my iambs run quite freely...

If God is Love, then You are False. )
quinara: Sheep on a hillside with a smiley face. (Default)
This is where I hope to call on the great ranging knowledge of my flist: my grandpa took my family to see the stage version of Terry Pratchett's Nation at the National Theatre a couple of weeks ago and the play was pretty awful, but I was passing by a book stall on the South Bank and poked through the poetry section, not looking for anything in particular, and happened upon a little book covered with card and very thin leather, entitled POEMS. in gold lettering, in a quite pointy caveman-esque type font. Amongst the knackered paperbacks it caught my eye - however, on opening it up I couldn't find the author's name (there's a foreword signed THE AUTHOR but that's it). Flicking through, none of the poems were familiar, and since it was the sort of Romantic pastoral kind of thing I quite like I thought I had to buy it - it was only a fiver and I reckoned I would never see them again otherwise.

I kind of assumed, though, that a quick google-fu would tell me who the author was and reveal that I had just managed to find a really weird edition of someone fairly standard but generally believed to be crap. But I can't find them at all! So I was wondering if anyone had any suggestions for methods of enquiry? Or wild stabs in the dark (especially of date):

The collection contains a massive load of quatrains, some specifically in the style of Omar Khayyám and others in the Rubáiyát form, 'Three Chinese Pictures', some haikai (with a footnote explaining it's an exclamatory Japanese form - they're all 17 syllables but in random amounts per line), 'inscriptions for sundials' and various other occasional things including the one I've typed up below the cut, which is a reflection on Sibelius' incidental music for The Tempest (quite a few imply the author was into music):

Read more... )

I might just say they're by Spike and have done with it. ;)
quinara: Wishverse Buffy in a white frame. (Buffy Wish white box)
Having come back from uni yesterday and about to start other work tomorrow, I'm rather struck with the feeling that now would be a good point to post this. I think it's just about ready for consumption...!

THANK YOU [personal profile] gillo, as always for your invaluable beta skillz. I know we haven't done much on this in a while, but it seems to have matured into something I'm happy with, like a cheese or a port or something.

Ratings etc. are fairly standard for the series - PG-13; 4000-ish words (500-ish lines); still feeling the Spuffy; OCs are starting to be sprinkled more liberally; warnings for death/grief and consent/agency issues (non-sexual)

Buffy concludes her tale of coming to LA.

[II]

III

      “I ran the way I'd come, went back to find
The others, but I only got so far –
Before you reach the stairs the second floor
Has got this corridor, real narrow so
You can't have loads of people running down
It all at once. There Sadie, ... )
quinara: Spke standing over the Chinese Slayer, with the caption 'Slayer' at his feet. (Spike Slayer)
So I feel obliged to chat about it on my personal journal too! I have:

Positive Exposure

R/NC-17; c.13,600 words (in two parts); no particular warnings besides pervasive misogyny.

Safe in the bosom of the A-List, Spike is set up on a date with Buffy: the world's most hated tabloid trash. Wackiness refuses to ensue.

This is a fic set in late 2005-ish (maybe a bit later), springing off from the point in Buffy S8 and AtF when everyone becomes famous (so post AtF #17 and S8 #21 (Harmonic Divergence). Considering I haven't actually read the comics all that closely, it's hopefully still accessible for people who haven't read them. [livejournal.com profile] bogwitch and [personal profile] spiralleds did a fantastic job as betas (though, heh, guys, you might not recognise parts of the story anymore...). I have rather clung to my use of 'till' as a preposition though.

and

Five Poems Spike Wrote about Buffy (and One that She Wrote about Him)

PG-13; two sonnets, 17 lines of hendecasyllabics, two lumps of free verse + a Buffy poem; no particular warnings

This is kind of self-explanatory. There's one poem from S5, two from S7, one from AtS S5 and one from post-NFA. Buffy's is in some sort of domestic futureverse. Naturally.
quinara: Wishverse Buffy in a white frame. (Buffy Wish white box)
Do I want to post this now? About 24 hours before the whole world vanishes to WriterCon? Really? Ahhh!! Forgive me, [livejournal.com profile] gillo, for I am weak. And it's quarter to two in the morning, so I am weaker than usual.

Yes, it's Book II of the Spikeid, the first book of which I posted nearly a year ago. I didn't forget about it after all! Indeed there is a lot in the works - my possibly ambitious goal is to have Book VI written and posted by the end of the year. IV is probably more likely...

First off, THANK YOU [livejournal.com profile] gillo, QUEEN OF BETAS, because without her this would be pretty bloody awful (and I mean that). Second off, if you're scared by the idea of epic poetry I promise it's basically like prose, just in a funny pattern on the page. Though I do try and give nods to The Gang aka my beloved epic predecessors (mostly Virgil, whose structure I am borrowing mercilessly), it should be understandable if you've seen to the end of AtS.

Vital stats for this book: 4000-ish words (500-ish lines); PG-13; Spuffy, natch; warnings for death/grief and consent/agency issues (non-sexual).

Buffy begins the tale of how she came to LA.

[I]

II

      “The story’s not that long, you know.” She sniffs.
“I guess, I only said that ‘cause that’s what
You’re meant to say when it’s like this: too much
To tell. And complicated. ... )
quinara: Sheep on a hillside with a smiley face. (Rinoa Petals)
Does anyone out there know how to keep abreast of decent modern poetry? (I always say I love poetry, and then over time it feels like posing and just something I say, and then I read some and remember. All the bloody time.) My internet skills are above average and yet I have no idea what/where to monitor.

Anyway, today I read Laura Dockrill's Mistakes in the background after being enchanted on a flick-through. Dockrill's an illustrator as well as a poet, so much of the time poetry crosses over into cartoons into comic strips - the whole book is an experience to hold and read to yourself, rather than being simply textual, a sort of final rejection of the recitation ideal (this poetry does not apologise for being written down and bound). She writes about everyone - mums dads, children, snails, the one nerdy bloke in an office - though I'll admit that one of the main reasons I like her is that she sounds like someone so definitely of my generation (and has to be from in or around London). She talks about Salad Fingers for Christ's sake... The collection is unrepentantly light-hearted, but there's still an everyday sort of darkness underneath it all, ready to strike if you start thinking about things too hard.

Also? The book includes a free sheet of wrapping paper and a page of stickers!!

Imagine this in handwriting, with the illustration of a girl holding an arm over her face (ETA: or look at this Amazon picture):

"Why am I so stubborn
???"

She asked, ramming her fingers
into the jar of silver skinned
onions - all the glossed up and
slippery, made her thumbs numb
and vinegary -
a food that bit back ... HARD.
"Perhaps" Said her mother,
"You were once a pickled onion yourself -
forever avoiding to be jarred."

.

7 May 2009 11:49
quinara: Approaching Black Mage from FFIX. (FFIX black mage)
Sometimes I forget how much I love the Iliad. And then there're bits that are just perfect, like where Hector just stops near the end of Book VI and speaks in this Greek that's so freaking clear:

εὖ γὰρ ἐγὼ τόδε οἶδα κατὰ φρένα καὶ κατὰ θυμόν·
ἔσσεται ἦμαρ ὅτ’ ἄν ποτ’ ὀλώληι Ἴλιος ἱρὴ
καὶ Πρίαμος καὶ λαὸς ἐϋμμελίω Πριάμοιο.


==

For well do I know this in my mind and in my heart:
There will be a day when sacred Ilium will fall,
And Priam and the people of Priam, him of the ashen spear.


And then he carries on, praying to Zeus that Astynax will become a great lord of Troy and telling Andromache to go and hang out with all the other women, even though he knows it's a great big farce. So amazing.

In other words, don't mind me...

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